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07-02-2001, 01:48 PM
HB pencils, 8x8" in skecht paper, made from a picture
07-05-2001, 08:12 PM
I like this portrait. She has a really strong profile and you have captured a lovely, amused expression on her face.
I feel I would like to see a bit of detail in the shoulder area as it looks a bit unfinished (to me).
Great job! :)
07-14-2001, 12:26 PM
07-16-2001, 12:49 PM
thank you very much for your comments
07-17-2001, 07:10 AM
great smile, great expression. Down to the point drawing.
I really like it.
Please post more
07-17-2001, 08:14 AM
Very nice for a first portrait
The anatomy of the face has been placed in well; I agree with Sandra about the shoulder area.
My only other comments would be just suggestions to give it more "punch"; like values from light to dark in the facial anatomy, and rendering the hair in masses, rather than a lot of lines, with regards to the value changes there also.
Keep it up...........Ken
07-17-2001, 10:59 AM
Thanks mac and ken for yours kindy comments.
I agree about it need more work in hair zone, that is really difficult for me.
Thanks you one more time. ee you
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