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07-02-2001, 12:48 PM
HB pencils, 8x8" in skecht paper, made from a picture
Comments welcome

07-05-2001, 07:12 PM
Hi Astur!


I like this portrait. She has a really strong profile and you have captured a lovely, amused expression on her face.

I feel I would like to see a bit of detail in the shoulder area as it looks a bit unfinished (to me).

Great job! :)

07-14-2001, 11:26 AM
Lovely expression.

07-16-2001, 11:49 AM
thank you very much for your comments

07-17-2001, 06:10 AM
Hi Astur,

great smile, great expression. Down to the point drawing.
I really like it.

Please post more

07-17-2001, 07:14 AM
Very nice for a first portrait

The anatomy of the face has been placed in well; I agree with Sandra about the shoulder area.

My only other comments would be just suggestions to give it more "punch"; like values from light to dark in the facial anatomy, and rendering the hair in masses, rather than a lot of lines, with regards to the value changes there also.

Keep it up...........Ken

07-17-2001, 09:59 AM
Thanks mac and ken for yours kindy comments.

I agree about it need more work in hair zone, that is really difficult for me.

Thanks you one more time. ee you