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baptist
03-18-2015, 05:39 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/18-Mar-2015/194068-STANDBEELD.jpg

AnnieA
03-18-2015, 12:38 PM
Another gem from you, Jan! I love the way you handled the light glancing off the windows and window frames on the left - so simple and yet it explains a lot. And the composition really works - the bush with yellow flowers on the right is a good balance for the couple walking on the left. Luscious paint application in the street and sky and buildings. Nice work!

I'm curous where this scene is, and how large is the painting?

Bevahlee
03-18-2015, 12:39 PM
I like the application of paint and the color, but the couple on the left seem too large for the figure on the right and for the window. I feel the perspective is off and the two figures (intensity of color) might be muted a bit to push them to that distance. There are others who might have better input on this

baptist
03-18-2015, 02:32 PM
]Thanks a lot AnnieA............................Jan :)
Bevahlee ,you must learn to look better before you make comments.
It is a statue on the right and no human figure.
Everyone as seen that , except you.
The figures on the left, I can make it as small and as large as I want, as long as the heads are on the horizon line.
The perspective is in order. Maybe not one hundred percent correct but this is not necessarily in art. Only architects have to draw this correct...............................jan

Aussiesrus1
03-19-2015, 08:40 PM
Superb value & edge control. Great composition & those wonderful touches of ochre & pink add warmth & balance the many blues & greys - Super !

Michael.

baptist
03-20-2015, 06:54 AM
Thanks a lot Michael.............................jan :)

baptist
03-20-2015, 06:54 AM
Thanks a lot Michael.............................jan :)

baptist
03-20-2015, 06:55 AM
Thanks a lot Michael.............................jan :)

baptist
03-20-2015, 06:55 AM
Thanks a lot Michael.............................jan :)

baptist
03-20-2015, 06:55 AM
Thanks a lot Michael.............................jan :)

bhavani.krishnan
03-21-2015, 03:24 AM
Lovely! :thumbsup:

baptist
03-21-2015, 04:43 AM
Thanks a lot bhavani.krishnan ...............jan :)

ColinS
03-23-2015, 12:06 AM
Another beauty, Jan. I really like your work.

baptist
03-23-2015, 06:14 AM
Thanks a lot ColinsS........................jan :)