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11-08-2014, 02:01 AM
Hi another just finished.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/08-Nov-2014/1812302-RYm.jpg

11-08-2014, 06:27 AM
Could I have some critique please, so I can improve. thank you.

11-08-2014, 03:34 PM
"Improvement" is an over-rated and mis-understood term.

When painting a real object,
such as a 1954 Packard,
the detail of leaving off the fins above the headlights on the chrome ring,
or getting a reflection off
is something one can improve on.

In non-objective abstract art,
giving "improvement" advice is merely a way for the viewer,
to tell the artist,
what I would have done differently.

Is my advice a way for you to improve?
But you are the creator of this art.
If you feel it is not yet done, or "right" yet,
then only you can change it.

IMHO, the last two pieces were spot-on.
This one is spot-on.

Rotate this aboot,
stare at it for a while, zoom in, zoom out
crop it (on the computer) many ways,
change the saturation, tint, values (on the computer)
if there is a flaw in it, it will become apparent.

and have patience on folks commenting on your works,
some of them have families, jobs,
lives off the WC website,
and many just look and never comment.

and this was posted at 1am in the States....:confused:

and some just ramble on, .......



11-09-2014, 05:38 AM
:)Thanks a lot Greggo I get you'r point.

11-09-2014, 09:43 AM
It is probably harder to paint "Down Under" because the canvas is upside down....

11-10-2014, 01:43 AM
I think its a nice warm abstract. Would love to know if you have anything in mind while you paint them - any emotion, vision, etc?

Or, youre just trying to follow Picasso (first blue, then red / rose.. :))?

11-11-2014, 08:10 AM
Not really just enjoying mixing the colours :)

11-11-2014, 08:12 AM
It is harder Greggo, the paint runs upwards :lol: