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Callisti
06-03-2014, 05:10 AM
Hey guys,

before I model and animate this girl doing some yoga I would like to know if I can improve something. I am worried that the front view - side view comparison didn't work :/ Please let me know if there are any mistakes in anatomy or anything you may notice. Thank you :)

Elainepsq
06-03-2014, 09:56 AM
Hi, welcome to the forum. I think you did a great job. At first, I thought your back view was a little heavier than the front and side, but I measured and the front and back width are the same at corresponding parts of the body.
the only thing that bothers me is the hairline in the back, seems too pointy. It looks more like short hair there, but she obviously has long hair that is tied up. I just think the hairline should be a bit more rounded.

Callisti
06-04-2014, 03:20 AM
Thank you for your feedback, Elaine! You are right, the hairline does not fit to long hair, I will change that! :)