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b'anna
06-02-2014, 04:07 PM
Hey all. I've been playing with photoshop to try and figure out what to do with it as far as painting and tried something easy. As you might have guessed, I'm still trying to loosen up. All comments and critiques are always welcome. THANKS for looking!
Barb

Elainepsq
06-03-2014, 10:03 AM
I think this is very nice,very painterly. Nice strong contrasts. I'm a little bothered by the top of the cup, it just doesn't seem exactly round. I think the curve should go more like this, but again it is IMHO - in my humble opinion.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-Jun-2014/42008-bannas_cup.jpeg

LavenderFrost
06-03-2014, 12:18 PM
Don't you hate ellipses? lol

Nice image, has a real Sunday morning feel to it. Considering the style, you leave the cup as is. Depends how you feel about it. But I did have to look at the title to figure out what the eggs were. You might want to round out the one on the right a bit more and the area between the eggs is a little confusing.

b'anna
06-03-2014, 12:37 PM
Thanks guys! No i don't hate ellipes, THEY hate ME! Lol. I have to learn to listen to my hubby more because he said the same things about the eggs. Thanks again!
Barb

Lucy-Foote
06-04-2014, 02:41 PM
I like your loose style of this painting.. The one egg on right could be a bit more rounded, but, maby the hen had a problem laying it.:lol:

Lucyhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Jun-2014/70668-a_Foote_icon_sm.JPG

b'anna
06-04-2014, 04:49 PM
Lucy, I love your thinking! Yes, the hen had a bit of a problem laying it!
Barb

maria_khurram
06-05-2014, 09:52 PM
I like it's loose style.

arl
06-14-2014, 06:32 AM
Wonderful loose style and brush work.