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ChristyQ
04-16-2014, 06:34 PM
Watercolor on 22" x 30" paper

I went more a more abstract look, while still keeping the faces, and filled the whole background this time instead of leaving part of it blank. The guys face bothers me, but I am at a loss on how to make it better at this point.

C&C welcome and appreciated


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Apr-2014/1339374-Night_and_Day_Small.JPG

kishtara
04-16-2014, 06:43 PM
This is totally gorgeous.. beautiful faces and backgrounds!

I think the guy's face issue might just be his nostril - his nose seems to be pointing towards me instead of in line with pointing towards the girl's face?

Regardless, gorgeous work!

ChristyQ
04-16-2014, 07:01 PM
This is totally gorgeous.. beautiful faces and backgrounds!

I think the guy's face issue might just be his nostril - his nose seems to be pointing towards me instead of in line with pointing towards the girl's face?

Regardless, gorgeous work!

Good call, I'll get in there after it's done pressing and add some shadow under the nose to make it more look-towards-er-her-ie lol Right now it's like he is saying, "Huh, you seem to really be into this, not sure what to do here, just going to umm... let you do your thing I guess..." :lol: :lol:

birdhs
04-16-2014, 08:24 PM
very nice effects

abstractca
04-16-2014, 09:16 PM
wow, very nice!

jimwhalen
04-17-2014, 05:19 AM
Very nice work! Hope you will repost it after you make your changes.

ChristyQ
04-18-2014, 01:19 PM
Fixed the guys face a widdle bit

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/18-Apr-2014/1339374-Night_and_Day_Small_-_Copy.JPG

idylbrush
04-20-2014, 10:57 AM
Very nice piece. Like it a great deal.

davefriend
04-20-2014, 11:11 AM
Not all fixes are better but you did it. I like the eye closed better too! :thumbsup:

Ishka Baha
04-20-2014, 04:23 PM
This is a great piece Christy.