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Inward Arts
04-11-2014, 05:48 PM
Here is an acrylic, 10x10.
I'd love some encouraging and honest feedback.
Thanks for looking.
ps. the right side is a bit more dull but its showing more dull in the photo than it really is.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/1239792-IMG_3152.JPG

DMSS
04-12-2014, 08:09 AM
I like your painting. i like the colors and I think the composition is balanced as to the weight of the shapes. What would happen if there were more value contrast? I like the texture, which creates line especially in the lower right area. I've enjoyed looking.

Inward Arts
04-12-2014, 11:37 AM
thanks, that is helpful. I think as a new painter thats one of my growth points: getting more contrast in. I put a layer of soft gel on it already, but if I put some more color in, I can go right on top of that, right??? hmmm. With so much texture I didnt want it to get too busy. Anyway, lots to consider. I'll sit on this one for awhile.
(anyone else's C&C is more than welcome too!!!)

aquabone
04-12-2014, 01:33 PM
very nice!
:thumbsup:


aquabone.