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frayling
04-10-2014, 07:15 AM
drawn in Twistedbrush my take on a sort of cartoon film style

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/10-Apr-2014/50510-pond_wc.jpg

LavenderFrost
04-10-2014, 11:27 AM
Very nice little scene, love all the plants. But to be honest, my first impression was that it looks a little blurry.

frayling
04-10-2014, 05:58 PM
Thanks michelle totally agree with you I've lost the original tbr file so only have a copy of a copy etc.
rob

frayling
04-11-2014, 03:43 AM
found some Wip's of this

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/50510-pond_wip_wc.jpg

frayling
04-11-2014, 11:09 AM
this is another painted in the same style and slightly before pond

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/50510-trees_flowers.jpg

LavenderFrost
04-11-2014, 11:26 AM
This one is nice too, just needs some deeper shadows in the foreground.

That's too bad that you lost the original file. I guess if you felt like it you could sharpen it up. It is really pretty.

Lucy-Foote
04-11-2014, 12:44 PM
I like both paintings. Good colors too!!

Lucyhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/70668-A_Foote_icon_bak.JPG

frayling
04-11-2014, 01:45 PM
Thanks michelle and Lucy and I agree with the foreground Michelle so did some quick additions

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/50510-trees_flowers2.jpg
this was another in the series

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2014/50510-trees_flowers3.jpg

b'anna
04-11-2014, 08:51 PM
I Like all of these! I Think I like that last one best. It has a better depth of field. Great stuff though.
Barb

frayling
04-12-2014, 03:44 AM
I Like all of these! I Think I like that last one best. It has a better depth of field. Great stuff though.
Barb
Thanks Barb Funnily enough the last one was the first one I painted and the others were spin offs....
Rob

LavenderFrost
04-12-2014, 11:20 AM
:thumbsup:

Elainepsq
04-12-2014, 01:46 PM
Very nice, but my first thought on the pond and actually all of these, is a little more detail in the foreground. By increasing the contrast in the second one, you inadvertently did ad more contrast and it really helps.
I would say in general, in order to pull the foreground to the front, either make it more detailed, less blurry, more contrasty, and any of those will achieve a better depth of field.

bluemanjacob
04-13-2014, 10:29 AM
Very nice! :thumbsup: And thanks for sharing you W.I.P. :)

fattab
04-16-2014, 11:44 AM
These are all wonderful scenes and very picturesque. I love them. :)