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lisaastrup
03-23-2014, 07:21 PM
Hi.

This is my newest painting, acrylic on canvas 50 x 60 cm.
I'm a little unsure if it needs more work, so for now I just let it rest.

C&C and all input would be nice and helpful :clap:

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Mar-2014/79005-33.jpg

Jon
03-24-2014, 08:18 PM
I like the start of this and I agree this may need a little more work. I am concerned about the black hole near the top because it keeps pulling my attention there and keeps it there. Let it rest until you feel you know where you want to take this and be sure to share with us if you do make changes.

Ishka Baha
03-25-2014, 05:27 AM
Oh, my goodness. Flip it immediately. IMHO it is much, much stronger that way up.

lisaastrup
03-31-2014, 05:13 PM
Hi.

Took the advice and gave it some more work and a flip too...:wave:

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Mar-2014/79005-ide.JPG

Ishka Baha
03-31-2014, 05:35 PM
Moon Dust.......................

abstractca
03-31-2014, 08:51 PM
that yellow is so full of energy, with the contrast of the blue it looks so explosive!

lisaastrup
04-01-2014, 12:49 AM
thanks abstracta, I have named it " shooting star"