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chunbumpark
03-22-2014, 09:34 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Mar-2014/1311430-The_Defender_3_-__small.JPG

What do you guys think of this work? What should I do to improve this? and finish? What should I do with the space below the head?

C & C welcome

birdhs
03-22-2014, 10:12 AM
with just a few more dark marks heer and theer to make the face/head pop out just a tiny bit more...

the COI should be the facial expression,
as it is (on the computer screen) the face is not clear yet.
is the head covered with a hat / turban?
if not, then the eyes are too low (they should be centered in the skull)

study Hairy Wolf's art to see how his faces are just strong enuf in the midst of much mad mark-making.

this is almost a very good painting

tanxfersharinwidus

greggo

Ishka Baha
03-22-2014, 05:54 PM
I have to agree with Greggo with regards to the face/head. Otherwise I like it.

Hairy wolf
03-23-2014, 03:19 AM
Yes, I'm with Greg and Nikki on the face issue.
In my opinion, either outline it or use brighter colors in it to differentiate it from the colors around it.

chunbumpark
03-23-2014, 05:49 AM
Thank you very much for your helpful suggestions! I will try to improve it!