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Ginette
09-24-2003, 12:33 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-23-2003/4946_FloridaAugustSunsetT.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-23-2003/4946_FloridaAugustSunsetM.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-23-2003/4946_FloridaAugustSunsetD.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Florida August Sunset
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x24
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Winter is coming soon.


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything!?

Wayne Gaudon
09-24-2003, 06:39 AM
the beauty of dreamland ..

designditz
09-24-2003, 07:05 AM
The sunset is great! love the sway of the palms too!

HRobinson
09-24-2003, 11:29 AM
Hey Ginette. I believe a focal point would have improved this piece and those rounded clouds don't reflect the same feasibility that the other subjects do. You have presented some outstanding impressions and a color scheme that reflects your superb talent.

-Harry

pero lane
09-24-2003, 11:50 AM
Love those palm trees!!! Looks like a postcard!:)

Ginette
09-24-2003, 03:16 PM
Thanks all...

Harry good point about the curvy clouds & focal point... I'm working on those skills... maybe some day I'll have a break thought.

Thanks again :)

Ginette

Paintonbrush
09-24-2003, 08:54 PM
You're really rocking. Whispy clouds and I like how you made them a bit stormy

Unbeliever
09-24-2003, 10:02 PM
expressive
attitude
face in the sky?
texture
pasted on palms