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vurban
09-22-2003, 07:54 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-22-2003/943_Hostages.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Two
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 26cmx31cm
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Just a quick study of emmotions

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What are the emmotions?

jerryW
09-22-2003, 08:53 AM
the left side back of the head leaves a gap perfect to expand reworked interlocked hands, which if improved will make this a great painting in progress regardless of any particulars:
now the hands are constraining and need artistic liberation

(otherwise reminds me of simon levenson somewhat)

giniaad
09-22-2003, 10:54 AM
two of nearly one
very nice!!

(agree the hands need a bit of attension)

dornberg
09-24-2003, 08:46 PM
i like the light shapes, the circular rhythm, and the balance of color

Unbeliever
09-24-2003, 10:09 PM
mother and daughter
striking faces
consolation and comfort
sharp features
dicky hands