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Wayne Gaudon
09-21-2003, 04:44 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-21-2003/5946_rusticpine.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Falling
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Playing with a fall scene .. I can't get this to photo right but it's close .. not as colorful in the photo as it really is ..

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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giniaad
09-21-2003, 05:12 PM
I like

only nit
base of trunk of tree
(our left)
too uniform-ish curve
bring trunk down in spots...
(some roots pop up, maybe?)
bring brush up in spots
(imho)
or not...
very nice!

Lorijo
09-21-2003, 05:12 PM
I like it! It makes me want to go up north and see the leaves! Lorijo

pampe
09-21-2003, 09:25 PM
very lively and interesting, Wayne

designditz
09-22-2003, 02:32 AM
Love the orange! Like this one alot!

Wayne Gaudon
09-22-2003, 10:37 AM
thanks all ..

giniaad .. corrections added. Thank you.

Kady
09-22-2003, 12:43 PM
Hi Wayne - this is my favorite of all you have done lately ! I think you have it down to perfection in this one ! Colors are just right - don't tinker !!!!! :clap: - Kady

Wayne Gaudon
09-22-2003, 05:35 PM
thank you Kady .. now I need a good subject to test this theory. :D

artbabe21
09-23-2003, 10:22 AM
a painting of things to come...lovely Wayne!

pero lane
09-23-2003, 11:17 AM
The tree is my favorite part of this peice....the colors overall suggest movement. Well done Wayne!:)

Grasshopper
09-23-2003, 12:06 PM
As it slowly appeared on my screen in scroll-fashion, when I saw the orange leaves I went, "Yay!" in my head. Great depiction of my favorite season.

FOX
09-23-2003, 01:08 PM
It seems to me the tree should play a roll in the overall movement being suggested by the bushes. I would love to see some of the thicker branches less static and more in concert with this movement. My humble opinion.

Wayne Gaudon
09-23-2003, 01:29 PM
thanks all ..

Fox .. very good idea. I was swinging on the rest and did the trunks as trunks without the added sway. :D

alfaro
09-23-2003, 09:06 PM
i think your work is great,

ed

Wayne Gaudon
09-24-2003, 06:37 AM
thank you Ed ..

Andrew Rance
09-24-2003, 08:50 AM
Vibrant!

impressionist2
09-24-2003, 08:59 AM
Wqayne, I know I already made a comment on this painting somewhere, but wanted to say here, that the colors are just wonderful!

Great work.

Renee

Unbeliever
09-25-2003, 02:13 AM
unrestrained, unruly
a hot day
distracting foreground

Wayne Gaudon
09-25-2003, 12:07 PM
thank you ..

Unbeliever .. yes, more leg and less dress would have worked to greater advantage.