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Fagan
09-21-2003, 03:52 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-21-2003/2383_harvest-knife.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-21-2003/2383_harvest-knife-cl1.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-21-2003/2383_harvest-knife-cl2.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Harvest
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
oil on canvas with palette knife

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
comments and critiques welcomed. This was done entirely with knife. No brush work.

Wayne Gaudon
09-21-2003, 04:41 PM
I think the distant hillside needs to be pushed back as it sits on the roof of the buildings because of value and color. Like the coloring and sky.

capricorne
09-21-2003, 04:56 PM
Strong painting.
jan

Fagan
09-21-2003, 05:11 PM
Wayne...yes that bothered me too. I will change the color and shape of the roof instead.

Jan...thank you! *SMILE*

artinoils
09-22-2003, 06:24 AM
ooh, would not change the roof color...it's working well. The distant hills maybe mauvy greyish color. It's late...what do I know.

giniaad
09-22-2003, 11:02 AM
this is a bit different for you
and very nice!!

tbezesky
09-22-2003, 08:25 PM
I didn't know you did knife paintings.
The colors and strokes are well balanced,
nice composition.
Very nice painting!

Fagan
09-22-2003, 09:48 PM
Ginia...I try all kinds of things. *LOL*

Tracy....I have done a few knife paintings...always in oils though.

Here is one of my knife paintings from last year:

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Sep-2003/2383-mimosa_final.jpg

tbezesky
09-22-2003, 10:25 PM
I like that one too, I am attracked to trees like that.
I think the last one you did though has better colors and form.
You have improved!

Paintonbrush
09-23-2003, 12:59 PM
Everything about this sings.!!
:clap:

Unbeliever
09-25-2003, 02:54 AM
open space
vast
makes me breath easy