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roberj
09-18-2003, 07:18 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-18-2003/25262_red_barn.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Red Barn
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 8x10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This little painting didn't go to market....so I reworked it. I've been looking a several painting from the last year or so and taking them back to the easel. I glazed a darker red over the barn and reworked the grass in the foreground, deepened the shadows under the trees.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Too trite?

Done?

dornberg
09-18-2003, 10:30 AM
i like the rhythm carried up from grass to clouds

GreenElf
09-18-2003, 10:49 AM
The sky is heavily clouded but it didnt reflect its colour and brightness over the land .

mkillough
09-19-2003, 02:45 AM
I absolutely love red barns in fields. Love everyone I've ever seen. Love this one, but my eye keeps being drawn to the section to our right on the barn. Is it a door? I would paint it out and just have the beautiful red barn.

designditz
09-19-2003, 03:16 AM
very vermonty...i agree with the door or fence.. maybe just leave the doorway.. love it...nice work or should i say rework.