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La_
10-02-2013, 03:47 AM
12x12 oils on stretched
no title yet, suggestions welcome
how 'bout that background?

flash image (sharper detail)
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/02-Oct-2013/84648-yellow_sky_girl2.JPG

no flash image (more accurate colors)
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/02-Oct-2013/84648-yellow_sky_girl1.JPG

thanks for lookin'

la

snoball
10-02-2013, 07:16 AM
La, this is beautiful! Such fresh bright colors! It fairly jumps off the canvas. I like the reflected yellow on her face.

AllisonR
10-02-2013, 10:32 AM
I also like the reflections in her face. Nice stylized features. I do not like the background at all, it is very distracting and practically screaming at me "WARNING WARNING". You asked.

La_
10-02-2013, 01:33 PM
hahaha
thanks ladies

need a tie breaker vote ...

la

snoball
10-02-2013, 01:39 PM
OK, I won't change my vote but I will swing it just a bit......
Put a vallance across the top of the curtains to hold the yellow from running out of the top.

La_
10-02-2013, 02:34 PM
trees
they're trees

aaahhhhhh

now i need background ideas

lol

la

snoball
10-02-2013, 02:40 PM
Ooops sorry. They looked like drapes letting sun in a window. Do some leaves across the top to hold in the sunshine then. :)

snoball
10-02-2013, 02:46 PM
Do you think it makes a difference?

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/02-Oct-2013/36183-la.jpg

Dana Design
10-02-2013, 02:55 PM
Call it "Sunshine"! Cause, that's what it's all about!

La_
10-02-2013, 03:21 PM
yes, yes it does make a diff!

sunshine, liking that too!

yay team!

c'mere paintbrush ...

la

paputsza
10-02-2013, 05:44 PM
Hmm, some cleavage maybe, just a little. And it could use a dip above the lip. The eye on the left (our left) could use the same bright light as the eye on the right. The right eye looks so real and sparkly.

eyecandy2
10-02-2013, 08:51 PM
Something with her right eye and I think that you need more contrast and changes of values. As is, I think that it is too flat. Nice idea but it needs some work.

Andrewcody
10-03-2013, 04:07 AM
She is cute, with a wonky eye

I would turn the trees into some sort of grid for flowers

Regards
Andrew

ispyart
10-03-2013, 04:55 AM
I like it - you managed to capture a very cheeky / playfull pose

swoop
10-04-2013, 12:45 PM
Nice feeling overall.
The face is a bit too anime.
The background doesn't match the face.... to me. :-)

La_
10-05-2013, 01:00 PM
thanks guys n gals
haven't done anything with her, yet
home for five days now, should be able to do, something ...

la

Andrewcody
10-07-2013, 11:38 PM
Delete Grid, replace with Trellis......brain fade on Friday

chunbumpark
10-08-2013, 04:14 PM
she looks like a girl i saw in 5th and 6th grade

KarinaRose
10-10-2013, 02:11 AM
I love her expression! So sweet! I think the colors in the background need to be greyed and cooled a bit and edges softened to harmonize with her spirit but not distract from her face. On her I would decide where the light source is that way you can add some nice highlight to the form. Then PO in some dark values as well. She is kind fo washed out from being all mid values. That eye on the left is missing a highlight sparkle. I would bring the flowers up higher because we would see some breast if they are that low. How about some touches of pink in the flowers to connect them to the pinks in her face? Ha, sorry if that was too much!