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Paintonbrush
09-16-2003, 08:11 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-16-2003/4969_pooldone.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: HOT
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
comments welcome

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
When I was home this summer, my gal friends and I were sitting around the baby pool and these gals (did not know them) sat around the big pool....

coulter
09-16-2003, 08:34 PM
Ha! This is great! on suggestion would be brighter brights on the top most planes and darker shadows (maybe only on the closest :D )

Mark

tbezesky
09-16-2003, 10:41 PM
I love it! :D
Nice brushwork too, as usual!

Alan Cross
09-16-2003, 10:55 PM
Nice Ilike it .....
Alan :)

Wayne Gaudon
09-16-2003, 11:00 PM
:clap:

pampe
09-16-2003, 11:29 PM
;) don't dare coment on the big girls/big pool thoughts

I love this!

It seems differnt yet, truly you

Did you have fun?

Pam

Paintonbrush
09-16-2003, 11:32 PM
yes I had fun.....lol.....I wish I could get my scanner to work, the photo gives me the chuckles....because when its hot, we older women :rolleyes: dont care what we look like

Asher
09-17-2003, 12:06 AM
An excellent job - not just the brushwork and color, but the expressiveness of the figures, as well.

My only question is whether the fence could have been toned down a bit. It seems a bit distracting and the shadows cast by the women would suggest that the fence might have been somewhat in shadow.

artbabe21
09-17-2003, 01:12 AM
So glad you finished this...love the personalities that show even from the back...visual language we women read...very COOL painting...universal!:clap: :clap: :clap:

leverettfinn
09-17-2003, 07:33 AM
I just LOVE this!!!

If you ever decide to paint the subject again...this might be an interesting crop....
Lauren

artinoils
09-17-2003, 10:10 AM
Great subjects...agree with the crop. Nice job on the figures.

Paintonbrush
09-17-2003, 10:39 AM
Great Crop-wish I could cut the top of the canvas off. oooiiieee..
thanks guys, the fence is sticking out like a sore thumb now. (but maybe not so much in real life) hubby always looks at the pics on wc and says "that doesnt look anything like it!" aint that the truth. In the actual photo the fence is more black/grey, not there at all...but the pavement behind the gals I brightened so like hot cement so your eyes may not get that far....Maybe I will tone down the fence a bit more.
thanks...:D

Lorijo
09-17-2003, 12:07 PM
I love it! What a cool subject! Lorijo:clap: :clap:

pero lane
09-17-2003, 12:53 PM
Nice work Diane!:)

Gilberte
09-17-2003, 03:27 PM
Charming !