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Inward Arts
07-26-2013, 08:59 PM
OK folks. Would love some C&C! Im thinking there are composition problems? What are this ones strengths and weaknesses?

the background color is a combo of titanium white, a blue, jenkins green. the detail to see the texture, is showing more blue.
its a 12x16 acrylic ~ just made with soft gel and I used alcohol to get it to rub off easily.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/26-Jul-2013/1239792-2013-07-26_04.06.09.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/26-Jul-2013/1239792-2013-07-26_04.01.54.jpg

it dawns on me that the detail is better than the actual piece. Hmmm.

THANKS in advance!

birdhs
07-27-2013, 12:19 AM
As I rotated it I found the different directions make if 4 paintings in one.

I prefer it upside down.....

thanx4sharing

greggo

HenrietteW
07-27-2013, 09:09 AM
The fragment is showing a completely different background colour. Which is the most accurante? Other than that: The first one shows a painting somewhat out of balance. Now, that can be an intended advantage, but I don't get that impression here. I like the structure and the idea, but I can't say anything about the colour until I know more (re. above). :) Very interesting, though.

Inward Arts
07-27-2013, 09:28 AM
The actual color is more of a turquoise green than blue, and the red tones in there are mostly from Quinac. gold.

Im liking how 'old' it looks, like a building being torn down ~ but there is definitely something off balance. Im not sure if just turning it upside down fixes it...but I could do that.

It looks like I'll be sitting with this one for a bit until the solution comes!