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Bluesman
06-25-2013, 02:55 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/25-Jun-2013/31507-3paint.jpg
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/25-Jun-2013/31507-SADIE_TWO.jpg

I reworked a few of these any tips or crits are most welcome.
Thanks,
John the newbee.

liz15a
06-25-2013, 05:41 PM
Really like the dog but personally i would try and rework his other eye as it looks a bit flat imo compared to the nearest one which is lovely!

Yorky
06-26-2013, 03:22 AM
Really like the dog but personally i would try and rework his other eye as it looks a bit flat imo compared to the nearest one which is lovely!

I agree about the eye.

Doug

pjartwc
06-26-2013, 04:19 AM
Ditto with the eye!

reikiart
06-26-2013, 08:31 AM
If you get the other eye looking as good as the one eye looks, your painting of the dog will really be nice! I like the little house, too!

Bluesman
06-26-2013, 09:42 AM
Thanks I totally agree about the eye. I'll re-paint this one... the photo I used had no highlight in that eye....good news I learn from mistakes.
Thanks to you all!
John

olliewood0702
06-26-2013, 11:02 AM
John, I suggested a highlight in the dogs left (right as we view it) eye before so I have to agree with that critique. As it is it looks half finished.

I like the sunny and full of life hut and fence painting. Your koi painting is unusual and works well for an underwater effect. The rose is great; except I think you could use even darker pink in areas near where the petals are attached; but it's really lovely just as it is too.