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Bluesman
06-13-2013, 11:39 AM
5X7 arches 140

All comments or crits welcome. Hard to know when to stop...lol.


John

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/13-Jun-2013/31507-Old_dude.jpg

ErnstG
06-13-2013, 12:08 PM
Sehr schön John - ein richtiger Typ!
Sie haben zwar Licht und Schatten gesetzt,
aber es fehlt an Tiefe und "Kontrasten".
Bitte keine schwarze Farbe benutzen!

Very nice John - a real guy!
Although you have set light and shadow,
but it lacks depth and "contrasts".
Please do not use black color!

Ernst

M.L. Schaefer
06-13-2013, 03:42 PM
I very much agree with Ernst! The first thing I saw were your very appealing colors...then I found the face. I bit more contrast in the face with those same colors, and, voila, a winner!

:heart: Margarete

Bluesman
06-13-2013, 04:39 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/13-Jun-2013/31507-old_dude_2_edited-2.jpg

Thanks for the tips.
John

ErnstG
06-14-2013, 06:25 AM
Great - so it looks much better!

Ernst

reikiart
06-14-2013, 08:15 AM
It's great, John - your portrait work seems very promising, I hope you pursue it!

olliewood0702
06-14-2013, 09:40 AM
GREAT, loose portrait. You did a fine job on the skin tones and his whiskers; how much further will you take it? I think it looks done now.