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D.W. Flint
05-16-2013, 09:07 PM
Afternoon Repose re-sized..http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-May-2013/108422-horse_by_water_003.jpg

La_
05-17-2013, 01:57 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/17-May-2013/84648-starescreen.gif uuuiiI think it's a foal

like the comp very much, shadow and reflection, niice!

seems to be a super dark/sharp line, his back right upper thigh?

try again here for a bigger pic, yes .. :cat:

la

rossmarie
05-17-2013, 05:07 AM
Very well painted, Darren. I love the light catching the foal on its head, back and legs and the soft hillside background is super. The sunlit grass is also very effective. The painting has a lovely feeling of serenity. I think the shadows from the foal's legs are a bit heavy and "stiff" and perhaps the bank with all those stones is a bit too detailed.
As a composition,perhaps those three parallel lines (top of grass, bottom of grass and water's edge) are a bit unfortunate. It would have been nice if perhaps the grass fell away a bit on an angle.

Overall I think you have painted an excellent picure.

Mike :clap: :thumbsup: :wave:

eyecandy2
05-17-2013, 02:33 PM
It could be improved by making it less symmetrical. Not a good idea to have the center of interest in the center of a painting. You could crop most of the tree on the right so that your deer is in the upper third rather than the center. It would create a more pleasing effect.

D.W. Flint
05-17-2013, 11:08 PM
La, Mike and Phil. Thank you for your comments. Good suggestions all, and I appreciate it....