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04-27-2013, 10:46 AM
My dear Natasha has 4 months. I worked on Canson paper and I have tried to be nice. Please critiquehttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/27-Apr-2013/1112102-551282_454985794575641_881887072_n.gif
04-27-2013, 12:05 PM
Lovely kid and lovely portrait. I really like what You did with background too.
04-27-2013, 12:52 PM
Beautiful job! What an adorable baby, she must have been a joy to paint. I would try to tone down her lips some. They seem a bit strong in value. I know her lips are just gorgeous and it must be hard to resist using reds but putting more skin tones in lighter values will work better I think. Also check rhe center line in her lips, it might need tweaking to get the shape right. Beautiful job!
04-27-2013, 03:32 PM
Tatiana, thank you!
Chris,thank you, your advice is always welcome:wave:
Wow what a cutie and what a painting. really nice!
04-27-2013, 06:22 PM
What a beauty! Both baby & painting. My only suggestions would be to slim her cheeks down a tad & soften the lines of her nose & mouth.
04-28-2013, 03:24 PM
Wow! Great job.:clap: Especially her beautiful brown eyes.
04-28-2013, 10:16 PM
Painting is beautiful. Two things to check and to be honest i am sitting on my couch without a ruler handy to double check but it appears to me that the bottom of the ear should line up with top of lips, just a tad longer than in your painting, and the right side on the painting ( her left side) of bottom lip appears just a bit larger on photo to me. The colors and detail are outstanding. Pam
04-29-2013, 07:27 AM
Thank you all for your suggestions ..... any advice for me valuable. I have a great desire to learn to paint ... but I have no basis and no technical knowledge. I learned here from Wetcanvas and ours advice. Because thank so much, much!!!By the way I learn English, I use the interpreter and I'm have good fun to brighten your own life ...:wave:
04-29-2013, 07:37 AM
Beautiful painting of a beautiful baby!
05-01-2013, 01:56 PM
this has interest ... :)
in the painting , she looks older , more mature ,
and is understandable to compare to the photo :
> her eyes are looking into you ... calm .
> her mouth is gentle , not pouting .
> her cheeks are full , but not like a baby -
the blush/rouge is across the face to the nose .
the painting looks like a gentle person ...
is she such a person now ?
will she grow up to look like the painting ?
who can say ...
there are some things/problems about the features/proportions ...
show this in the Portrait Forum to get good feedback . :)
skin tones are very good !
ps. keep this painting , or a copy , close to you ...
see what the years bring . :)
05-02-2013, 09:56 AM
Thanks for the suggestions .... for me it is precious and the only way to and correct errors :wave:
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