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scurfer
09-10-2003, 07:10 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-10-2003/24167_horse.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: winter scene
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x28
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I want to work some blue hues into the sky and work the snow some more. Also bring out the dark objects from silhouette.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Critiques?

artjunkie101
09-10-2003, 07:20 PM
I really like this. Normally I'd think there are too many colors schemes going on, but in this case I think it works very well. I like the way it fades from warm colors (in the sky) to cool colors in the foreground. It creates an almost rainbow effect, which I think is really cool. Keep up the good work!

roberj
09-10-2003, 08:07 PM
The sky is quite wonderful. I think you would see reds and yellows reflected on the snow, cast shadows darker from the barn and tree towards the viewer. Also the perspective of the barn roof looks off. Even if that's the way it really is, I would lengthen the horizontal at the eave of the roof to show more perspective. The smaller shed also.



Bob

jerryW
09-10-2003, 08:19 PM
layout is good the colors need to interpenetrate better maybe