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susie-q
03-26-2013, 03:46 PM
This is a painting I'm finishing up. I need a little advice on making the flower look more like it is resting on top of the keys, rather then just "floating" above.
Someone please help?!

beetee
03-26-2013, 07:21 PM
I am guessing a shadow on the keys would make it 'sit down'.

Nice job btw
Brian

Dana Design
03-27-2013, 11:09 AM
The shadow on the keys would touch the stem and petals. I'd put it closer to the black keys.

silvenus
03-31-2013, 06:26 PM
I can only dream of painting as good as this, the floating flowers add to the dream. why spoil my dream leave it Please

dfp819
04-01-2013, 07:46 PM
Maybe start by simply reinforcing (slightly darkening) the shadows that you already put under parts of the stem. Great work otherwise, I really like it!

susie-q
04-02-2013, 08:56 AM
I have made the changes to the shadows as suggested. What a difference! Thanks everyone.

rossmarie
04-02-2013, 11:48 AM
Wonderfully painted Susie - what medium?

Cannot imagine how you had the patience to paint all those piano keys so accurately! The branch & bloom are lovely.

Mike :clap:

Dana Design
04-02-2013, 11:57 AM
I'd only suggest 'settling down' the greenery at the bottom of the painting. Again, shadows toward the edge of the painting.

Otherwise, great work.

susie-q
04-02-2013, 01:27 PM
Mike the painting is done with water soluble oil on canvas, and I was quit surprised at how little time it took to paint.
Dana, thanks for the advice.

rossmarie
04-02-2013, 01:33 PM
Thanks Susie - anyway, I think your piano is grand!!

Mike

susie-q
04-02-2013, 01:58 PM
Done...I think!

ianos dan
04-02-2013, 02:27 PM
Looks great susie-q! if i'll painting these image ,l will work a little more on the details of leafs ,and the petals ,in a word a little more work on the rose ,just to give enough sharpness ,to give some perspective.in this stage the rose looks a little bit blurry ,contrasting with the piano keys that are very sharpen .
So ,the rule of perspective is that the object closer to your eye (in the focus),is sharpen an more detailed than the objects placed to a bigger distance:)
Very nice painting!Love the wood texture and color:)