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ncgirl
03-21-2013, 10:15 PM
Mostly NuPastel, light gray, dark gray, white, black. At the end I swatted at it with white soft Rembie.

The camera washed it out a little. I tried to punch it up with Photoshop and it wound up looking garish, so left it alone.

C & C welcome as always. Thanks for looking!

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Moises Menendez
03-22-2013, 06:38 AM
I like the composition and the use of the shadows. One thing distract my attention is the lines at the fingernails on the right hand holding her neck. You may erase them. Oh, On his chest, I would dark the area next to the fingertips.

ncgirl
03-22-2013, 09:47 PM
Thank you Moe, I will work on those two areas. I think I was in a hurry to be done with it, and didn't notice. A fresh set of eyes helps, thank you! :)

DAK723
03-25-2013, 08:31 AM
Very dynamic pose! Hands are the most difficult thing to draw or paint and you've done a nice job (aside from the fingernails!). The difficult angle of her head is nicely done, too!

Don