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03-04-2013, 01:02 AM
16 x 20 oil on canvas.

Softened the horizon. More detail foreground. Sharpened rocks.

What do you think?.


Tennessee artist
03-04-2013, 02:04 AM
looks ok to me

03-04-2013, 03:33 AM
I really like it, but the rocks seem to be floating in the sea.
Maybe some darks or shadows to anchor them more, and a clearer water line?

Do you have a ref photo for it?

or some images here-
or shadows

03-04-2013, 06:27 AM
I can now begin to feel the sea pounding towards me --- no escape, the rocks are hemming me in, but thank goodness that wall in front of me may deflect the surge after all !!
That is the effect your changes have made. Congratulations.

03-04-2013, 06:38 AM
very beautiful. Those warm colors on the rocks are just perfect for the color harmony.

D.W. Flint
03-05-2013, 12:04 AM
I like this one a lot better...

03-05-2013, 04:21 PM
Just had a look at untitled again and think the changes you made are great. Lovely atmospheric painting-

03-05-2013, 09:42 PM
16 x 20 oil on canvas. Comments welcome.



D.W. Flint
03-06-2013, 12:17 AM
This is a Keeper now. I'd put a frame on it. Beautiful work...

03-06-2013, 01:04 AM
Thank you. I find myself going back over the same areas. Time to move on.


Dana Design
03-06-2013, 11:34 AM
Beautiful bold color! Love this! Well done.

03-06-2013, 01:18 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/06-Mar-2013/107721-ss.jpgWhat you did was great
I prefer the narby object to be more pronounced, and This creat greater when you made a disparity between the colors
love you big wave too:thumbsup: