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harryfisherman
03-04-2013, 01:02 AM
16 x 20 oil on canvas.

Softened the horizon. More detail foreground. Sharpened rocks.

What do you think?.

Harryhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Mar-2013/113016-000_0568.jpg

Tennessee artist
03-04-2013, 02:04 AM
looks ok to me

~JMW~
03-04-2013, 03:33 AM
I really like it, but the rocks seem to be floating in the sea.
Maybe some darks or shadows to anchor them more, and a clearer water line?

Do you have a ref photo for it?

or some images here-
http://www.google.com/search?tbm=isch&q=rocky%20coast&tbs=imgo:1&biw=1360&bih=642&sei=hk40Uc6wCoepiAKeqYHQAg
or shadows

dgford
03-04-2013, 06:27 AM
I can now begin to feel the sea pounding towards me --- no escape, the rocks are hemming me in, but thank goodness that wall in front of me may deflect the surge after all !!
That is the effect your changes have made. Congratulations.
Geoff

Bevahlee
03-04-2013, 06:38 AM
very beautiful. Those warm colors on the rocks are just perfect for the color harmony.

D.W. Flint
03-05-2013, 12:04 AM
I like this one a lot better...

obanya
03-05-2013, 04:21 PM
Just had a look at untitled again and think the changes you made are great. Lovely atmospheric painting-

harryfisherman
03-05-2013, 09:42 PM
16 x 20 oil on canvas. Comments welcome.

Thanks

Harryhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Mar-2013/113016-000_0570.jpg

D.W. Flint
03-06-2013, 12:17 AM
This is a Keeper now. I'd put a frame on it. Beautiful work...

harryfisherman
03-06-2013, 01:04 AM
Thank you. I find myself going back over the same areas. Time to move on.

Harry

Dana Design
03-06-2013, 11:34 AM
Beautiful bold color! Love this! Well done.

mudar
03-06-2013, 01:18 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/06-Mar-2013/107721-ss.jpgWhat you did was great
I prefer the narby object to be more pronounced, and This creat greater when you made a disparity between the colors
love you big wave too:thumbsup: