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mach73
02-24-2013, 06:48 PM
Hi all! This is one of my first attempts at oil pastels and I realize I need a lot of technique work! :) I still think it looks pretty cool though. I would love any feedback you would be willing to share.

Crayola oil.pastels with some portfolio series as well on an old piece of floorng.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Feb-2013/1188871-IMAG0291.jpg

Flycatcher10
02-25-2013, 10:17 AM
Very nice painting and so glad to see your work. What size is this piece.

I really like your fabric work on the woman's dress - has a nice pearly and sheen appearance with the blues, salmon, pinks and grays, very nice!

I feel beautiful emotion coming from both the guitarist and singer.

Pat Isaac
02-25-2013, 11:49 AM
Welcome to the OP forum...:wave: This has a lot of nice things going on and I especially like the feeling you have evoked between the people.
Is it on wood flooring?

Pat

mach73
02-25-2013, 03:22 PM
Thanks for the feedback! The piece is about 40x30 on a the backside of some paneling I had out in the shed. I really enjoy the way oils pastels feel on the wood grain.

mirizar
02-26-2013, 07:33 PM
Very, very nice. Only thing I'm finding odd is something with her right eye. Like I'm not sure it's her eye or eyebrow.

mach73
02-26-2013, 09:29 PM
Thanks Michelle! Her right eye is at a totally different angle from her left. It is a mistake but I'm mostly happy with it and completely terrified if trying to fix it. LOL. I figure that if I fix it, it will lead to me over-working her and it will lose the whatever it is that makes it cool.

CarlyHardy
02-26-2013, 11:17 PM
Really like this a lot! Shows emotion....must be a story there. Strong lighting emphasizes the emotion between the two also. Don't touch it!

....and welcome to the forum! Hope we see a lot more of your work.
carly