View Full Version : girl on the water

02-22-2013, 03:13 PM
18 x 36, oil on canvas
not new, not old, somewhere in between



02-22-2013, 05:44 PM
Much better than the bucket lady. :angel:
moody water, moody scene. Nice waves. (are they called waves when they are this small?)
Crits - all that hair falling down is weak. I think she would be more mysterious and interesting if some hair fell down, but the edge of her cheek and chin showed, a hint of nose or brow. I think her butt is perfect. I think her breast is too high. I think her left arm is way too skinny.

02-23-2013, 07:37 PM
love it but where are the hidden critters 'n' things spent 2 days and can't find anything I do agree her left arm is a bit too slender

02-24-2013, 10:15 PM
I agree with above & wondering where the light source is located?
Hair seems flat.
Great work on the reflection of the legs.
The water through the lower right side of the scarf needs a little definition..
La, I like this. This painting has a quiet voice, it's got a hint of wonder & innocence with her nonchalance & solitude but holds mystery and seductiveness, too.
I'm glad her wrap is white.