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02-05-2013, 09:57 PM
acrylic on canvas
02-05-2013, 10:02 PM
02-08-2013, 09:59 AM
Great pose, movement and feeling.
Does it need some more dark round the basket shaddow?
Are legs a little too short? The hunched pose makes it difficult to be sure but the hand and knee dont look quite right to me. Arnie
02-09-2013, 08:18 PM
Thanks so much for these useful suggestions!
Yes, the basket shadow is not dark enough.
I thought the hand might not pass muster yet, but didn't notice the knee.... will fix that!
I also plan to show that the skirt is outside her legs, not vice versa.
02-18-2013, 11:57 PM
forgot to darken the basket in shadow
02-19-2013, 12:21 AM
Does she require another sandal?
It doesn't appear that the basket load is central, but is off to one side on her shoulder and arm - would make it harder to carry
02-19-2013, 05:37 AM
thanks so much for these helpful suggestions!
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