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amorris54
01-30-2013, 12:29 PM
I am working on another painting and would like to have your comments as to what you think I can do better.

This picture is a combination of at least 5 reference photos and then I have arranged them into my composition.

This is Oil on canvas 24x30

Thank you for honest critique. I learn something from everything each artist shares with me.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Jan-2013/977599-love_remembered_for_wc.jpg

rossmarie
01-30-2013, 05:08 PM
Hi - a nice painting and lovely autumn colours. With the focus on the girl, I wonder if you might make the mid and background more hazy and indistinct - it competes with the girl too much. IMHO some softer out of focus shapes in the background would add impact to your attractive picture.

Mike:thumbsup:

Hoosier Fred
01-31-2013, 10:22 AM
I love the girl's expression and posture - she is in happy remembrance of someone she loved. Very well done.