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Trumper
12-22-2012, 05:50 AM
I am doing this for my sister for Christmas whose dog does flyball.All advice welcome please,
Thanks :)
Oil on canvas 12 x 9
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:)

arnieb
12-22-2012, 11:45 AM
Expression on dogs face and front legs/paws first class. Great movment. :thumbsup:
Back legs look unfinished, assuming your still working on them.
The connecting brace on right seems to connect differently, and hand holes would look better if they were same size. To me, this oddness in the jump is distracting from the movement. Arnie

Trumper
12-22-2012, 01:39 PM
:) Thanks for the feedback,the back legs are sort of WIP and blurred,i will have a go at the jumps again.
Do i need to do anything with the background,i am trying to keep it simple,
Thanks :thumbsup:

arnieb
12-23-2012, 04:26 AM
Background works for me - keeps it simple as you say. Keeping a little blur in black legs will add movement. Arnie