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Lasmeja
11-19-2012, 05:22 AM
oil pastel :)
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Nov-2012/949129-Fish.jpg

Flycatcher10
11-19-2012, 08:24 AM
Niace painting, the fish have a good angle and body form. You may want to consider putting in a couple of rings in the water around the fish to demonstrate movement in the water.

Lasmeja
11-19-2012, 11:16 AM
Thanks for the constructive comment Mary, I tried to draw ripples in the water!

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Nov-2012/949129-Fishes.jpg

Pat Isaac
11-19-2012, 12:24 PM
I do like the movement in this painting and the suggestion of movement in the water helps.

Pat

Lasmeja
11-19-2012, 01:22 PM
Thanks Pat! Excellent critics are at a forum.

stee71
11-19-2012, 02:03 PM
Hi Lasmeja, This is a lovely bright colourful painting, the only thing that I can't make out is the pale blue/white highlight along the bottom of the top fish and top of the lower fish's head. Is this a highlight or is the underside of the fish a pale blue? I'm only viewing on a very small phone screen so it might be easier to distinguish at full size.

I like how you have kept the colours clean and bright with no hint of mud.

Steve

p.s i like Mary's suggestion of ripples The one's you have added are just enough and work really well :)

CarlyHardy
11-20-2012, 12:00 AM
Good job with your color choices. I like the circular motion created by the fish and the underwater grasses.

Lasmeja
11-20-2012, 12:08 AM
I thank Steve for viewing and the comment! Pale-blue color is a foam, perhaps, it badly turned out
CarlyHardy Thanks! I am very glad that you like my work