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sun_merman
06-20-2001, 06:18 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/20-Jun-2001/mominlaw2.jpg

Here's a Mother's Day Gift I did for my Mother-in-law...Comments?

Can't seem to get the photo to post. Help?

Well, here's the one I sent my Mother

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/20-Jun-2001/Mom_L.jpg

Rod
06-21-2001, 07:53 AM
Hi,
You have used some bold colours but you need more darks. Not enough difference , all tonal values are similar. A dark background at the top of the flowers would have made them pop more. The yellow is too close to the green foliage,
Rod.

sun_merman
06-21-2001, 11:47 AM
Thank You for your comments Rod. I wish that I had asked you
before I sent them to my mother and mother-in-law.

I'll try using your suggestions on my future flowers and show
you the result.