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axxxel
08-23-2003, 09:52 AM
"Rendez-vous"

On canvas, 40 inches large

Tamana
08-23-2003, 09:54 AM
...yeah. :)

heh
08-23-2003, 09:57 AM
it makes me laugh :D

somerset
08-23-2003, 05:06 PM
I like. You have a real feel for geometrics.
If I might toss in a minor nit. Don't do everything for the viewer, the line drawn to the two meeting circles...

amanda
08-24-2003, 05:28 AM
This has wonderful appeal, I like the colours you've used and the geometric style is great.

arourapope
08-24-2003, 10:09 PM
Inspiring! I'm enjoying these immensely.

vic_6177
08-25-2003, 09:14 AM
I agree with the statement below.

I am glad to see that someone has given some constructive criticism, instead of being fearful of hurting the artist's feelings.

I for one am here to learn.


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I like. You have a real feel for geometrics.
If I might toss in a minor nit. Don't do everything for the viewer, the line drawn to the two meeting circles...


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axxxel
08-26-2003, 06:15 AM
somerset, you're 100% right, I shall not do everything for the viewer. But in fact the title help the viewer much more than the line drawn to the two meeting circles. If this were called "VFSGxx05" instead of "Rendez-vous", would you notice the line as you did ? not sure at all .... the title helped you too much !

somerset
08-26-2003, 10:22 AM
Thanks for that open mind.;) Appreciated.

I believe a rather interesting thread could revolve around titles and the significance of same. I happen to believe titles should be chosen with great care, and the body of work placed here by you suggests you do as well.

Art is an expression used to connect and communicate so there is little value in purposely 'cloaking' ones intent IMO.
This is a stunning piece. If I must err in my effort to communicate, I would leave the work intact and hope for the best.

Ramblings from an old hippie.