View Full Version : What the hell

08-13-2003, 07:47 PM
ink on paper, What do you think? to busy?

08-13-2003, 08:59 PM
ilike busy lines....this reminds me of the texure of an adobe wall....

08-13-2003, 10:25 PM
I don't think so, Bisco. I think if the lines were tight maybe. But, they are loose and open giving the illusion of freedom in the chaos.

08-14-2003, 12:33 AM
nope, not to busy
in fact, i think the busy-ness is why it works for me

08-14-2003, 12:51 AM
Works for me, too.

That's 4 out of 4 so far...


08-14-2003, 02:31 AM
that is good i like it,
i dont think its too busy,
it looks very smooth

08-14-2003, 10:29 AM
I think this is fine if you're using it as a sketch for ideas. As a composition as a whole, it doesn't work at all. Too cramped and unsure of itself. It also has a very incomplete feeling about it. Perhaps try going back into it and establish some values and bring out some forms. I see a lot of them trying to escape.

08-14-2003, 11:48 AM
Thanks for the constructive criticism jkoehler. About the composition, well.. there is no composition here. Atleast none I intended in any conventional way. Its more meant to be read... if that makes any sense. I made this very quickly 1-2min as if I was writing in a cartoon cursive. Ive fooled around with adding color/definition to this style but that just seems too much for so little. I just do these to blow off steam. But I find something charming in them.. They might mutate into something someday.