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BrianCC
09-07-2012, 04:16 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/07-Sep-2012/1116022-3_Sept_Three_Cows_in_the_Field_1_800x600.jpg http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/07-Sep-2012/1116022-3_Sept_Three_Cows_in_the_Field_2_800x600.jpg
Hi all,
I may have previously posted this in the wrong forum, apologies.
This is my first attempt in many years into oils. I have taken reference from article from a painting site which I saw a long while ago - sorry I can't remember it.
I know I have a lot more work to do, but hopefully I can progress. Although many people state that it is best to stay "loose" with the painting I rather like the ideal of painting detail - is this so wrong? I want to put more detail in the tree foliage and the grass. I also need to work on the far right cow - not too good at the moment.
All comments and ctitique is welcome,
Thanks

song_bird
09-07-2012, 12:31 PM
Nothing wrong with liking or painting detail. Go with your heart and explore your own art in your own way.

Trumper
09-07-2012, 12:59 PM
:)
1st and most important = ENJOY IT :)

From a quick look,
Add shadows and darks
The cows look small to me ,but i have no idea how large the trees are.
Needs some details/colour differences in the foreground.
Keep posting :)

BrianCC
09-09-2012, 01:36 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Sep-2012/1116022-3_Sept_Three_Cows_in_the_Field_3_800x600.jpg
Finished tonight - BUT....... not at all happy with the cow on far right so did some cloning in Gimp and got this
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Sep-2012/1116022-2_Cows_800x615.jpg
I think it improves the composition but would welcome some comments,
Thnaks in advance
Brian

song_bird
09-09-2012, 02:03 PM
Very nice! I think I would add a bit of texture to some of the foreground grass. Hope you get that cow right so you can enjoy your lovely painting! :cat:

Andrewcody
09-10-2012, 12:43 AM
Now you need to change the title.
I agree with Trumper those look like very small cows Brian
:)
Regards
Andrew

fractal_medley
09-16-2012, 08:58 AM
Are there any fences in this field keeping the cattle from wandering away?

aventurinedream
09-17-2012, 09:35 PM
personally I like the composition more with all three cows so I hope you can get that third one to your liking...

Trumper
09-18-2012, 03:39 AM
personally I like the composition more with all three cows so I hope you can get that third one to your liking...


I have to agree,i wonder if there is anyway of adding a 3rd cow possibly alot nearer to give some detail and scale:)

Finally painting
09-28-2012, 07:02 PM
Well I don't see why you couldn't put a cow nearer and if your worried about the detail of a cow, what's to say you can't have it even laying down in the tall grass just chewin" it's cud looking back at his buds. I like the colors and the composition.

Debzy
09-28-2012, 10:12 PM
Hi Brian! I agree with FP! Why not add the third cow, he could be laying in the grass, or have his rear partly facing us and he is looking towards the others. :thumbsup: No need to get into much detail, just colour blocks and suggestion! I would certainly have a go! :crossfingers: You can always paint him out again if you aren't happy with him! It has come along nicely though and I like your colours too! :clap: Cheers =)) Debs. :D