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MEBBBL
08-02-2012, 02:52 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/02-Aug-2012/1100612-Billy__marlye_at_Sanibel.JPG I've attempted to incorporate feedback.

Nose and mouth are not showing in boy's view.

Trumper
08-02-2012, 03:42 PM
I like it,the impression of the windy conditions:)

Debzy
08-02-2012, 06:47 PM
Yes, it's lovely! Oh so cute too! Perhaps you could do one of the front of them in this pose, it would also be lovely! Definitely can tell it's windy, and I like the shadows!!! Cheers =)) Debs.

MEBBBL
08-02-2012, 07:24 PM
Unfortunately, they're all grown up! I should have painted this twenty years ago. I just love this photograph. Like normal grandkids, they rarely were like this.

song_bird
08-03-2012, 10:17 AM
This is adorable and a beautiful painting.

There is something about his head that looks more like a man than a child. Maybe the head shape, the eye socket? Or maybe his ear, which looks very large for a child. Not sure what it is.

Also like your colors and comp, painterly effect. I liked the first version's painterly style very much also, although considered incomplete.