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fams
07-29-2012, 08:50 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-29-2012/156450_Tropical_Scene_24x30_low.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Tropical Scene
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is from a photo and my first large painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All cooments/crits are welcome and appreciated.

Debzy
07-30-2012, 07:56 AM
I think this is lovely and has improved very much. Well done in my opinion! cheers. =)) Debs.

Sissal
07-30-2012, 08:21 AM
I like much about this: composition, size, background, shadows....

I find the palm tops a bit flat. I think if you added some golden and tan tones in the leaves it would break up the green some, and bring the trees to life.

Nice enough as is, really.

fractal_medley
08-18-2012, 08:06 AM
I like the shadows. They are very realistic and like what you'd see in the tropics.

thevaliantx
08-18-2012, 08:37 AM
I feel like there could be more texture to the tree trunks, and more 'roundness' to them. Other than that, looks like a step after winning the lottery for me. ;)