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Felicity ffaith
07-25-2012, 05:51 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-25-2012/1093832_IMG_6539_-_Copy.gif


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Ballet Girl
Year Created:
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: A4
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I have drawn this for a lady, and just wondered if there is anything more I can do on it to improve it further before I send it to her.



MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I realize I still need to work on her mouth, how would you suggest I fix that?

beetee
07-25-2012, 08:50 PM
Cannot see what is wrong with her mouth,Lovely drawing

Brian

reverseengineering
07-25-2012, 09:26 PM
A happy lil ballet girl. I like the depth or shadow work you did by darkening behind her.

maryinasia
07-26-2012, 04:36 AM
looks great as is

eyecandy2
07-26-2012, 10:48 AM
Nice drawing. You captured the gesture very well.