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missbee
07-17-2012, 04:18 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-17-2012/139458_baileys6.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-17-2012/139458_gimme_a_shot_latest_5.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Bailey's
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 5
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I painted this from one of my mini bottles of Bailey's Irish Creme...I wanted the brush strokes to be a little more loose..maybe I should start over ..I think I reworked it too much...
the next painting.."Gimme a Shot" is more of how I like the flow to be..few strokes and each brush stroke meaning something

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
just any suggestions at all...thank you!

silvenus
07-18-2012, 08:08 PM
I think it's rather good, but the subject in my view does not suit this style of working, now a constructive comment, the table top is not even on either side of the bottle

eyecandy2
07-18-2012, 09:06 PM
Send it to Baileys after you fix the table. Not inspiring but you painted it well.

Andrewcody
07-19-2012, 03:25 AM
I like the glass painting

After a few shots the table would look like that :)

I don't want to be critical because I think it is a little triumph, Bravo

Andrew

Debzy
07-19-2012, 09:10 AM
I love Baileys, and especially love it straight so it is a winner with me!!! =)) Cheers Debs.

missbee
07-20-2012, 12:39 AM
Thank you all for your comments! :) oops yeah I 'll go back and fix the table.. I like my shot glass better too..I had something in mind for the Bailey's ..but it just didn't turn out like I thought...lol.. Thanks Debzy,Andrew,eyecandy2 and silvenus!

totsy
07-25-2012, 03:32 PM
I really like the way you've painted the bottle. Apply the same idea that you have for the table below. Here's an idea. If you redo this, less bold strokes in the background. So that the viewer is drawn to the bottle and glass..buyaka!

reverseengineering
07-25-2012, 09:53 PM
Pretty straight forward. Belongs over or next to a personal bar in someone's house.

missbee
07-29-2012, 10:20 PM
Thanks reverseengineering and totsy!