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Anonymous
07-11-2012, 11:26 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-11-2012/971884_the_tables_been_set.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Jul-2012/29065-971884_the_tables_been_set.jpg

GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: the table been set
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 20x15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
painted on canvas

in acryic

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
what do you think of it
good or bad
what could be inproved if anything

La_
07-11-2012, 11:39 AM
600 x 600 pixels is the recommended size for best viewing

all i can tell from this tiny image is that the vertical lines of the window are not straight up and down like they probably should be

la

Debzy
07-12-2012, 08:35 AM
It is difficult to critique on the small photo, and the large version is somewhat blurred. From what I can see you like colour, I do too! You have a nice assortment of colours but the actual items in the subject look to need more work and more attention to correct form, detail and light and shade. It is only my opinion, but as La commented, the window is sloping and the sill doesn't have correct perspective either. I think studying drawing objects and proportion first and other still life works will help, but it is a good effort and again, I like your colours!!! Cheers Debs.