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lumiere33
07-09-2012, 08:12 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-09-2012/973552_09072012.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: A shepherd
Year Created:
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 50X60 cm
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
A Marrocan shepherd, a scene from my souvenirs

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
every suggestion or comment are welcome

Coen1
07-09-2012, 03:04 PM
Lovely scene with bright colours. It adds a lot to a memory, I imagine. It looks as if you had a lot of fun, working on it!
Some things are not clear to me:
- on the left side: are these mountains or clouds?
- in the middle above: Is this a run?

The sheep are in a dark halo, as if you painted the sheep first and then the road.
I like this work.

lumiere33
07-10-2012, 04:05 AM
thanks coen1, I'm not completely happy with that and I wanted suggestions to improve it.
these are mountains in fog, and a distant village or ruin.