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Anonymous
07-01-2012, 12:16 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-Jul-2012/29065-112220_portrait_work_002.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Scetch of woman
Year Created:
Medium: Other
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 18x9
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Red crayon and white chalk

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All comments are welcome

Dana Design
07-01-2012, 12:36 PM
Would you please make certain that your image does not exceed 800 pixels in any direction? Thank you!

RetrospectiveGlance
07-01-2012, 12:59 PM
Sure thing D! 8^)

Dana Design
07-01-2012, 01:35 PM
Your drawing skills are very finely honed! Sketches are beautiful!!

RetrospectiveGlance
07-01-2012, 01:50 PM
Thank you D :)

eyecandy2
07-01-2012, 03:26 PM
Your representation of the facial planes is not too good. You need to understand that there is a zygomatic process or cheek bone and how light hits that area. The eyes are set in a socket or depression in the skull. As such, that area would be shaded in various degrees and the shelf created by the zygomatic process might be higlighted if the light is coming from above. I don't understand the dark bands that seem to be running across the face horizontally. Is it an artifact? I also think that the nares are a little too dark. In spite of all said, it is a nice drawing. Just needs a little work.

RetrospectiveGlance
07-01-2012, 04:26 PM
Ty for your advice. No its not old its a recent drawing the fixative that i use warps the delicate news print i use.

Andrewcody
07-01-2012, 08:00 PM
Can you show your reference please.
Eye look ok, mouth is over blown
Top of head and hair...is really odd, does she actually have a pointed ridge running down her left side?
Distance between her bottom lip and chin seems very short.
That shadow under her bottom lip is disconcerting, does it actually hang off her face?
Are her eyes really on a level with the center of her ears?

Andrew

RetrospectiveGlance
07-02-2012, 12:08 AM
I dont have a photo sorry. Oh yeah its a pointed ridge some people are just born that way ;)