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Breetheartist
06-27-2012, 06:51 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/28-Jun-2012/29065-eyes.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Iris
Year Created:
Medium: Charcoal
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This piece is not finished it is a work in progress I am planning on having the paper filled completely with eyes so any critiques or suggestions can be put into the drawing.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Do you like the concept of the drawing?
Is it well drawn and does it look realistic?
Any suggestions or critiques on the style or skill set of the drawing?
Anything else you see that you think would improve the drawing?

Thank you any advice is appreciated.

Andrewcody
06-28-2012, 12:33 AM
Step one reduce the size of the image.

Answers: Remember you asked
1. Do I like the concept (concept????) No
2. Is it well drawn - No, nor well thought out
3. Does it look realistic - No

Comment on Style -- ??? It is a charcoal drawing of a lot of eyes, is there a style?

Skill Set -- ?? I suggest observing some eyes to improve your eye.

Improvement suggestions -- have a plan for what you are trying to achieve. Think - if someone else drew this would I be interested enough to make any comment about it?

Andrew

Breetheartist
06-28-2012, 08:58 AM
Ok, thank you for helping I will work on improving. :)

maryinasia
06-28-2012, 10:15 AM
This is a great way to practice drawing eyes. You are noticing many things, such as the effect of light, the different textures and surfaces, how eyes look from different angles, etc. Very good! Please try to repost this in a smaller format.

Breetheartist
06-28-2012, 01:42 PM
Thank you maryinasia! I think I fixed the format, did I?

maryinasia
06-28-2012, 08:10 PM
yes, you did :)

reverseengineering
06-29-2012, 02:54 AM
i like the different emotions each eye shows

Breetheartist
06-29-2012, 10:55 AM
Thank you reverseengineering. :)