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bluemoonstar
06-05-2012, 06:04 PM
I'm planning to frame the seagull I did for June's Animal challenge. I ordered a custom mat & picked out a frame. I'd like some feedback C&C before I get it framed.

I don't want to overwork it, but I made a couple subtle changes- deepened the color around the gull to make it pop a bit more, and altered the waterline a bit, and added a little violet to the shading on the gull. Any other suggestions?
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Jun-2012/93432-Seagull-touch-up.jpg
As always, thanks!

aRt4us
06-05-2012, 06:34 PM
This looks great, I like how the Gull is walking into the painting, this keeps the viewer viewing the image from left to right.

Painting fun
Gary

chammi kaiser
06-06-2012, 04:02 AM
I think blending a little shadow at the top of the legs into the body would be a good idea. The legs look as if they were 'added on'. I would also put a light(and I mean very light) glaze of warmer yellow or orange on the beak to make it stand out a little against the sea foam. Otherwise, I love this and it will look great framed.

Greg Long
06-06-2012, 07:18 AM
Pat, I'd brighten and darken the bill and increase the amount of red on it, basically just to take the 'white' out of the colour.

bluemoonstar
06-06-2012, 08:51 AM
Thanks, Gary, Chammi, & Greg.
I'll work on the bill & legs a bit more. Appreciate your input.

bluemoonstar
06-16-2012, 10:54 AM
Made changes as you guys suggested. just brought it home from the framer-http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Jun-2012/93432-LoneGull_framed-sm.jpg
I'm happy with it. Thanks for your help!

KarenESP
06-17-2012, 10:00 AM
Beautiful!