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reviedad
05-30-2012, 09:49 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-30-2012/1054242_pentacost_artwork.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Transformation of Faith
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12 in. X 12 in.
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
As a minister I want to express my creativity but often feel hampered by my congregation who has a less extravegant need for expression. Behind the color and form is a painting of a Pentacost scene covered by what I feel is a transformational faith that is mine alone.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
General critique on use of color, form and expression of theme.

Coen1
05-30-2012, 04:30 PM
I like your work. There's beautiful colors (wow,the gradient from green to yellow!) and a lot of balance. Maybe too much balance. Like the 'balls' vary in size, in my opinion the 'lineforms' could have varied as well. Still, a strong image.