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artivicki
05-18-2012, 12:32 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-17-2012/112290_ROLLING_IN.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-17-2012/112290_SEDUCTIVE_SUNSET.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: "ROLLING IN" AND "SEDUCTIVE SUNSET"
Year Created:
Medium: Mixed-Media
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 100X100CM
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I used heaps of texture & resin on these pieces

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
1)do I need to introduce any more colours?
2)I'm not sure about the names?
remember one is a loose abstraction of waves & the other was inspired by the sunseting over the sea :)

Andrewcody
05-18-2012, 03:21 AM
I think both are successful especially rolling in.

lumiere33
05-18-2012, 04:12 AM
wawou great work, I love it

Coen1
05-18-2012, 05:52 AM
'Rolling in' is a direct hit to me! If the title is as in 'waves rolling in', it works. I'm surprised by the (not structured?) dark on the bottom of the painting, but it looks great! Fantastic painting!
'Seductive sunset' lacks a focus to me. It doesn't seduce me, but I guess that's a personal statement, because it is well done. That's the risk you took by publishing to very different paintings.:D

arnieb
05-18-2012, 12:23 PM
I prefere the sunset over the water - the gentle movement of the water helps to complete the scene. Arnie:thumbsup:

reverseengineering
05-18-2012, 02:00 PM
"Rolling In" is good just the way it is. Doesn't need more colors at all.