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smita
06-04-2003, 11:10 PM
Hello All!,
After struggling for a fairly long time today.....FINALLY i could upload the images i wanted to post!
Do tell me what u feel....
Have a nice day,
Smita.

smita
06-04-2003, 11:17 PM
the picture

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Jun-2003/15843-Window.jpg

PMurphy42
06-04-2003, 11:56 PM
Hi Smita

I don't know alot about landscapes...am new to watercolor. I think some darks would give your painting more depth.

I like your flowers and pots.

andylavallee
06-05-2003, 02:48 AM
Welcome Smita, most certainly need some more darks, the trees on b/right would cast shadows ans as the sun appears direcly in front some of the hill side would have darker areas, having said that the colours you have used have created some depth in the picture. hope my comments are ok. keep painting , keep posting thank you

rks
06-05-2003, 02:55 AM
Welcome to the watercolor group, Smita. You do very nice delicate work. I particularly like the shadows behind the flower pots. However, I agree with Andy that you need darker colors in some areas.

Roberta

artmom
06-05-2003, 06:39 AM
Welcome to the wonderful, wacky world of watercolor!! Nice painting, but as Andy said--More darks! Also, when you post a painting, please tell us if you used a reference photo, imagination, or direct observation--also, size, kind of paper, and kind of paints--it helps us make good, informed critiques.

Also, let us know whether you want critiques and/or comments!

Yorky
06-05-2003, 07:09 AM
I would put a little more colour in that foreground field.

Doug

Little Old Lady
06-05-2003, 07:56 AM
Good start and good advice.
JoAnn

pampe
06-05-2003, 10:49 AM
well done

GREAT shadows

agree about darks

Pam

SAM of DE.
06-06-2003, 01:35 AM
Smita, I know how you feel to finally get past that uploading thing! I had some problems with it too and still am not sure it will work every time! I'm new to WC and so don't feel qualified to give too much advice, but your window sill is so sunny and warm, I agree with everyone that you need some darks outside the window to give contrast to that sunny windowsill. Like the feeling.

Sylvielu
06-06-2003, 01:43 PM
Hi! Don't hesitate to "add more darks." Maybe you could darken the shadows. Also darken the ground in the foreground directly behind the flowers. by doing so the flowers will stand out more.