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Anonymous
05-28-2003, 08:57 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-28-2003/7623_abstract_landscape-sm.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: untitled abstract landscape
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 12x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a very different style for me, but it happened fairly easily. It's a landscape from my imagination, rather than a real subject, as I had no photographs handy. However, I'd like to tackle a real subject next, but stick with an abstracted view of it.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Did I accurately portray a feeling of a landscape? Is the style of this piece overdone, or did I manage to interject and individual style?
How is the composition and balance? Thanks!

TScottDove
06-21-2003, 12:20 AM
not sure i read this as a landscape other than blue being at the top like sky. the red seems a little too regimented, and the gray border is distracting. that said, however, there is an energy to the blue and green that I find appealing. [crop out the bottom half of the red and I think you'll have a stronger composition as well]

amanda
06-21-2003, 02:53 AM
I do read it as a landscape. I think it's quite well balanced and I like the colour combination you have chosen. Nice.