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lgol27
05-26-2003, 08:11 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-26-2003/22617_Intrusion.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Intrusion
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 50x65cm
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I want critique.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
as much as possible

giniaad
05-26-2003, 12:31 PM
use of lines
are uniform
creates a good flow

use of lines in the intrusive part
vary in texture and directions
indicating the intrusion
into the area of more soothing lines

the orange lines
show reaction to intrusion

could be considered
sexual in nature
(in a negative way)

the blue (with white) circle
could be considered
universal

nicely done abstract

lgol27
05-26-2003, 02:56 PM
Originally posted by giniaad

could be considered
sexual in nature
(in a negative way)


You just got it. The first name of picture was 'Rape'. Thank you for comments.

jerryW
05-27-2003, 07:57 PM
the process: outline
fill with some hatching
the idea may be blatant (but I don't really get it)
but some odd elements like blue ball are a kind of ballance - if an isolated type
you must go further with the effort
either with the intrusion
or with the recovery from intrusion -
now it is an action that is hard to relate to.

generally outlining separates regions
some need to relate more
the separation might be an unnatural tension.

bocote
05-27-2003, 11:15 PM
I'm going go out on a limb and agree with Jerry and will add...

composition good, yet nothing colinear. shapes and forms stand alone and stand at themselves.

B

Filbert
05-29-2003, 02:33 AM
Amazing work.
I think you did wonderful with shape and color.
If I were to suggest anything it would be to intesify and solidify the color fields. But that's a personal bias....I love paint. It's an intense piece . Well done

lgol27
05-29-2003, 04:10 PM
Thank you all for your comments. What I want to note that my style is separate forms hatched as if it was some kind of textile. So it explains the colors and outlining. But anyway I will think what you said. Once again, thank you.